Received the following web response at 10/22/00 04:09:13 PM:

Q1: What is your Name?
A1: J.B. Britten

Q2: What is your Email Address?
(Withheld)

Q3: Who do you want the poem written for ?
A3: Geralyn

Q4: Why do you want the poem written ?
A4: My girlfriend Geralyn and have been together for 8 months and then we went to college, now after just two months she wanted to take a break from our releationship. We were in love and she still loves me, but she needs space this poem should be writen to get her back and end our break.

Q5: What are the key messages you would like the poem to send ?
A5: That we still love each other and that the love we had to too good a thing to jsut lose and that she means the world to me. i really love her.

Q6: Do you have any funny, sad, happy, embarrassing or otherwise memorable moments that you would like to share ?
A6:

Q7: Do you have any other comments or thoughts ?
A7: Well she goes to school in Providence R.I. ( Providence college) and I go to school in Burington VT. She also has dark black hair and brown eyes. she is so much fun to hang out with and we really do have a great time when we not fighting. She thinks i put to much pressure on her but i am really trying to be a good boyfriend.
I love her more than anything, thanks for the help.

Q8: What style of poem would you prefer ? (Happy, sad, romantic etc.)
A8: Sad / romantic. It should be written to get her to find her feelings for me again.

Q9: Which charity would you like your donation made to ?
A9: Boy Scouts of America

Q10: Choose either the standard or the deluxe package.
A10: Standard

Space

My love for you runs deep, like a raging flood filled stream, I want us to be together, a simple wish, my only dream. You say that you love me, I know that I love you too. And if you only dream when you're asleep, how can your dreams come true ? I want to be with you so bad, and I'm scared of losing you, I wanted to send you this message, I didn't know what else to do. Because love is a two way street, it can never just go the one way, as there are too many broken promises, and unspoken words left to say. When we were a couple, my heart knew that it was right, felt good way deep inside, eternal happiness, in sight. And we've had such fun times together, a happier place there cannot be, just quietly listening to you talk, with you lying there next to me. You now say you want a break, you say that you need some space, they are some pretty lonely words, and they create an even lonelier place. I know I put pressure on you, but I'm just trying to do the right thing, I want it that maybe someday, you'll wear more than my friendship ring. A precious love, like the one that we had, is too rare to simply throw away, a decision that I know we would regret, we'd look back and regret the very day. So I guess that it is plain to see, college and distance keep us apart, but I still love you so very much, we're still joined together at the heart.

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Allen Jesson

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