What is your name : Melissa

Who do you want the poem written for: My recent ex-boyfriend of 2
years.

Why do you want the poem written: I would like to say I?m sorry for hurting him.

What are the key messages you would like to send: I just want him to know that I am extremely sorry for hurting him the way that i did and that I love him more than anything in the world and I am miserable without him.

Do you have any funny, sad, happy, embarrassing or otherwise memorable moments that you would like to share: Our first valentine's day was very romantic he took me the beach the night before and we had a picnic and waited to 12am so we could wait for valentine's day together. When I moved away to college he helped me move and put all my furniture together and is always teasing me about it. We did alot of crazy things to get away from my parents when I lived with them like rent hotel rooms and pretend i was sleeping at my friends house.

Do you have any other comments or thoughts: I want him to understand that I am very upset and hurt because I hurt him and I want to ask him to forgive me and give me another chance. One of the reasons that he doesn?t want to forgive me is because a lot of problems have occured between me and him the past year regarding other men b/c of his jealousy. I have never been unfaithful to him but I did date an aquaintance of him during a recent break up where I was extremely hurt by him. We, very recently, got back together and I confessed to him and he is very upset and hurt by this. I want him to understand that I love him and only want to be with him and I am very sorry for hurting him in that way and that I love him very much and always will.

What style of poem would you prefer (happy, sad, romantic etc.): I would like it to be both romantic and hopeful

Please choose which package you would prefer:Deluxe

Would you like a copy of the handwritten drafts:Yes

Valentines Past

I remember our first Valentines Day, If I recall correctly, you took me to the beach, but since then, I've learnt so much, you see, there are many lessons that I could teach. Because I'm so sorry that I hurt you, I'm sorry for hurting you in the way that I did, and now I'm sitting here, miserable and begging your forgiveness, there you see, my feelings are no longer hid. I love you more than anything in the world, in truth, I love you with all my heart and soul, for with you in my life, I feel complete, you are the one that makes me completely whole. I remember we waited until it was midnight, just so we could spend Valentine's Day together, I felt so safe, so loved in your arms, it's a place that I should've stayed forever and ever. So now I find that I'm so, so in the wrong, it's like I've got two left feel and want to dance, and all I'm asking for, no, I'm begging for, please, please, just give me one more chance. I promise I'll never let you down again, and this is something I vow with all my heart, I want you to understand that it's only you I love, but to be honest, I just didn't know where to start. Look, I've never been unfaithful to you, all I did was go on a rebound date, but it's only you that I really want, because you are it, my one and only soul-mate. So, let's control the green eyed monster, let's put him back in his cage, where he belongs, and the only other thing that we need is your forgiveness, because I can never undo some of these wrongs. But I'll spend the rest of my life making you happy, let me be your light that brightens the gloom, and once again, you can put us (and my furniture) together, once again maybe, we can share a hotel room. Because I've tried to imagine the future without you, but I see only dark, the picture never lasts, so please, please let me back into your life, and let us rekindle the magic of Valentines past.

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Allen Jesson

Comments:

loved the poem thank you very much.